What you're holding here is a wide survey of a particular American South — storefronts plastered with signage, porches occupied by tenant families, ravaged copper-smelting terrain, fields mid-harvest, and shacks half-swallowed by vegetation. The color is saturated in the way Kodachrome insists on saturation, and you've leaned into it: the Regal beer cans and orange brick of the first frame, the rusted reds and chemical greens of the Copperhill mining frames, the dense bottle-greens around the bayou fishing scenes. As a sequence it reads as a circuit — commerce, labor, dwelling, landscape, then back again — and you let the copper-mine frames (2, 11, 14, 18, 19) recur like a refrain, which gives the edit a pulse it would otherwise lack.
My eye keeps returning to the quietest frames. The seventeenth image — the tenant's home under that enormous cloud-stacked sky near Lake Providence — is the one I'd build the whole sequence around. The horizon sits low, the structure is small and dark against pale field, and the sky does almost all the work. That's the picture in this set that understands restraint. The eighth frame, the distant house across scrubby pine, operates on the same logic: a small human mark inside a large indifferent landscape. The fifth, the sunflower-buried house, gets close to it too, though the foliage crowds the frame harder than I'd like. These are the frames where you're letting space speak.
Where the sequence works against itself is in its appetite for incident. The first storefront, the fifteenth Coca-Cola facade, the tenth fish-store porch — they are information-dense, sign-saturated, every square inch of the frame doing something. Individually they're document; sequenced together they flatten into busyness. The cotton-chopping and oat-harvesting frames (9, 12, 13, 20) suffer a related problem: figures scattered at mid-distance across an even field, with no single gesture for the eye to land on. They read as record rather than image.
If I were editing this down, I'd cut hard. Hold the copper-mine frames to two — 11 and 19 are the strongest, because the road carves the composition and gives the scorched land scale. Drop 2 and 14, which are frontal and cluttered with industrial debris. Keep 17, 8, 5, 16 as your quiet spine. Of the porch portraits, 7 is the one that holds — the figures are arranged almost frieze-like under the dark of the porch roof — and I'd let it carry that register alone rather than pairing it with 10. The harvest frames I'd reduce to 13, where the stooked oats give the field a rhythm the others lack.
The other direction worth considering: you are mixing two distinct projects. One is a landscape-of-aftermath project (the copper frames, the abandoned shacks, the sunflower house). The other is a populated-vernacular project (storefronts, porches, fieldwork). Both are strong, but braided together they dilute each other. Pulled apart, you'd have two tighter bodies — one elegiac and spare, one densely social — and the elegiac one is, to my eye, where your strongest instincts already live. Trust the empty sky in frame 17. That's the picture telling you what the work wants to be.
Strengths- Frame 17's low horizon and towering cloud bank is the cleanest distillation of dwelling-against-landscape in the set.
- The recurring copper-mine frames function as a structural refrain, giving the sequence a pulse beyond simple geographic survey.
- Frame 8 trusts negative space — a small structure inside a large field of scrub — and lets scale do the emotional work.
- Color is handled with confidence; the rust-and-ash palette of the Copperhill frames reads as deliberate, not accidental.
- Frame 7's porch group is composed almost as a frieze, with the dark roof line giving the figures architectural weight.
What to try next- Cut the sequence by a third — the storefronts and the harvest fields are doing similar work twice, and the edit would tighten dramatically.
- Consider splitting this into two distinct bodies: an aftermath-landscape edit and a populated-vernacular edit, rather than braiding them.
- Hold the copper-mine refrain to two frames (11 and 19) so the motif lands instead of repeats.
- When you encounter a sign-dense facade like frames 1 and 15, try a second exposure that strips information out — step back, let architecture sit inside its surroundings.
- Build future edits outward from your quietest frame; here that's 17, and the sequence should be calibrated to its register, not against it.